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<h3>Connecting the dots</h3>
<!-- <p>A point represents the basic building block, the smallest idea, within a vast conceptual space. </p> -->
<!-- <p>Can you find the Big Dipper in a sky full of stars? Can you discover, through your mind's eyes, invisible points in conceptual spaces too?</p> -->
<!-- <p>Pts helps you connect and express those invisible points — as ideas, shapes, colors, motions, sounds, and more. </p> -->
<p>Like seeing the Big Dipper in a sky full of stars, Pts helps you connect the dots in the vastness of conceptual spaces.</p>
<p>Pts enables you to compose and visualize the invisible points, and to creatively express what you see in your mind's eyes points as ideas, shapes, colors, motions, interactions, and more.</p>
<p>Pts enables you to compose and express what you see in your mind's eyes &mdash; points as ideas, shapes, colors, motions, interactions, and more.</p>
<a href="./guide/Get-started-0100.html"><div class="cta">Get started</div></a>
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