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 # Visualizing Pose with Pts and tensorflow.js
 
-Demos using [Pts](https://ptsjs.org) to draw poses estimated by [tensorflow.js](https://js.tensorflow.org/)'s [PoseNet](https://medium.com/tensorflow/real-time-human-pose-estimation-in-the-browser-with-tensorflow-js-7dd0bc881cd5). It includes a `BodyPose` class which helps you manage and visualize the key points. This is still very much in a hacky prototype form, so please enjoy the ride :)
+Demos using [Pts](https://ptsjs.org) to draw poses estimated by [tensorflow.js](https://js.tensorflow.org/)'s [PoseNet](https://medium.com/tensorflow/real-time-human-pose-estimation-in-the-browser-with-tensorflow-js-7dd0bc881cd5). It includes a [BodyPose](./js/bodypose.js) class which helps you manage and visualize the key points. This is still very much in a hacky prototype form, so please enjoy the ride :)
 
 ### Demos
 
-- `a.html` is a simple demo that visualize an estimated pose from a static image.   
+- `a.html` is a simple demo that visualize an estimated pose from a static image. ([source code](./a.html))
 
   ![image a](./img/a.png)
 
-- `b.html` demonstrates how to take a webcam input, get the pose estimation, and draw the pose in an expressive way. Inspired by Matisse's paper cut-outs.
+- [`b.html`](./b.html) demonstrates how to take a webcam input, get the pose estimation, and draw the pose in an expressive way. ([source code](./b.html)) Inspired by Matisse's paper cut-outs. You can also try a [live version here](https://ptsjs.org/demo/more/tfjs_posenet/b.html) (experimental, require webcam access).
 
   ![image b](./img/b.png)
 
-- `c.html` is similar to "b" but using a video file. Inspired by Oskar Schlemmer's Triadic Ballet.
+- [`c.html`](./c.html) is similar to "b" but using a video file. Inspired by Oskar Schlemmer's Triadic Ballet. ([source code](./c.html))
 
   ![image c](./img/c.png)
 

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@@ -52,21 +52,21 @@ <h3>Connecting the dots</h3>
         <!-- <p>A point represents the basic building block, the smallest idea, within a vast conceptual space. </p> -->
         <!-- <p>Can you find the Big Dipper in a sky full of stars? Can you discover, through your mind's eyes, invisible points in conceptual spaces too?</p> -->
         <!-- <p>Pts helps you connect and express those invisible points — as ideas, shapes, colors, motions, sounds, and more. </p> -->
-        <p>Pts is about connecting the dots, like seeing the Big Dipper in a sky full of stars, like spotting dust in the air illuminated by a beam of light.</p> 
-        <p>Pts enables you to compose and visualize these invisible points, and to creatively express what you see in your mind's eyes — points as ideas, shapes, colors, motions, interactions, and more.</p>
+        <p>Like seeing the Big Dipper in a sky full of stars, Pts helps you connect the dots in the vastness of conceptual spaces.</p> 
+        <p>Pts enables you to compose and visualize the invisible points, and to creatively express what you see in your mind's eyes — points as ideas, shapes, colors, motions, interactions, and more.</p>
         <a href="./guide/Get-started-0100.html"><div class="cta">Get started</div></a>
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     <div class="subcol">
         <h3>A modern javascript library</h3>
-        <p>Written in typescript and compiled to javascript ES6, Pts is lightweight and modular. It also comes with many useful algorithms for data visualization and creative coding.</p>
+        <p>Written in typescript and compiled to javascript ES6, Pts is lightweight and modular. It comes with many useful algorithms for data visualization and creative coding.</p>
         <p>Use it directly (link from <a href="https://unpkg.com/pts/dist/pts.min.js">unpkg</a> or download from <a href="https://github.com/williamngan/pts/blob/master/dist/pts.min.js">github</a>):<br />
         <code>&lt;script src="/path/to/pts.min.js"&gt;&lt;/script&gt;</code></p>
         <p>Or install it via <a href="https://www.npmjs.com/package/pts" target="_blank">npm</a> like this: <br />
         <code>npm install pts</code>
         </p>
         <p>Draw a dot that follows the pointer in a single line of code: <br />
             <code>Pts.quickStart("myID")(t => form.point(space.pointer))</code>
-            <br />Or <a href="./demo/edit/?name=pts.quickStart">something more</a> in just 5 lines of code.
+            <br />Or <a href="./demo/?name=pts.quickStart">something more</a> in just 5 lines of code.
         </p>
         <a href="./demo/"><div class="cta">See demos</div></a>
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@@ -85,13 +85,13 @@ <h3>A modern javascript library</h3>
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     </div><div class="feature">
         <div class="image" style="background: url(./assets/feature3.jpg) center center"></div>
-        <div class="usage"><strong>Handy functions</strong> for geometry, color, simulation, and many more. 
+        <div class="usage"><strong>Handy functions</strong> for geometry, colors, simulations, and many more. 
             <div class="cta-link"><a href="./demo/?name=create.delaunay">See a fun demo ›</a></div>
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     </div><div class="feature">
         <div class="image" style="background: url(./assets/feature4.jpg) center center"></div>
         <div class="usage"><strong>Lightweight library</strong> to use on its own, and together with other libraries. 
-            <div class="cta-link"><a href="https://github.com/williamngan/pts/tree/master/demo/more/tfjs_posenet" target="_blank">Use it with tensorflow.js ›</a></div>
+            <div class="cta-link"><a href="https://github.com/williamngan/pts/blob/master/demo/more/tfjs_posenet/README.md" target="_blank">Use it with tensorflow.js ›</a></div>
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