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When Rylan moves to a small north Georgia town, she discovers she is not alone. And in a town full of Werewolves, there are deeper secrets than an entire Pack hiding in the small little town. Will those secrets help her stay hidden with the rest of the Pack? Or will they get her kicked out of Shadow Springs for good? And away from the people she loves? Shadow Springs: Wolf Trials is a book about discovery. Wanting to fit in. And wanting to be apart of something that might not necessarily want her. She moves to a small town in north Georgia where she discovers that she is not as weird as she thinks. In fact, she is not the only one who can turn into a Wolf. An entire Pack lurks behind the shadowed veil of her grandmother's spell, a spell that has kept the Pack hidden for more than a century. That is not that is not the only secret that Shadow Springs is hiding though as she comes face to face with a secret she never thought existed. And Rylan is forced to keep that secret despite her best wishes. To join the Pack and stay in Shadow Springs, Rylan must complete three trails that will not only test her abilities as a person, but as a Werewolf. She must pass these three trials or be banished from Shadow Springs for good, leaving her grandmother and those she cares about behind. What will she do when the secret she is sworn to keep threatens all of that though when it is announced to the Pack. Will Rylan overcome the odds and become a member of the Pack? Or will she be forced to leave everyone she loves behind? I think this book would be a fun read for anyone who chooses it and it will be an exciting adventure for all. More details: What type of content requires beta reading? Fiction What genre is the fiction content? Urban Fantasy What aspect of the writing do you want feedback on? Plot, Character development

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@revival786

Greetings! I'm a professional in providing high quality beta reading service. I am a top-rated freelancer with about 15 years of experience, having served about 700 satisfied clients. Please message me to check my portfolio. Thanks, Revival

$250 USD en 7 días

4,8

(62 comentarios)

6,2

@aqsaishrat

Hi, Let’s make your writing shine! As an experienced beta reader, I don’t just offer basic feedback—I dive deep to provide valuable insights that can help you refine and perfect your work. In today’s fast-paced world of writing, fresh perspectives are key. That’s where I come in, bringing a sharp eye for things like plot, pacing, and character development, to make sure your story grabs attention and keeps readers hooked. I don’t just fix grammar mistakes. I focus on the bigger picture, spotting issues in the flow, tightening weak spots, and making sure your narrative is compelling. I tailor my approach to match your style and the specific needs of your manuscript. By providing thoughtful feedback on character arcs, plot structure, and pacing, I’ll help make sure your manuscript is as strong as it can be. I also use proven methods like deep character analysis and pacing adjustments to elevate your writing. Please feel free to reach out. I’d be glad to chat more about your interesting project!! ThankYou!

$500 USD en 7 días

5,0

(14 comentarios)

5,8

@arwamoizds

Hi, A hidden Pack, a century-old spell, and trials that test loyalty your urban fantasy deserves feedback that sharpens its claws. As a beta reader with 6+ years in the genre, I have honed manuscripts focusing on plot logic and character depth. Rylan’s struggle to belong in Shadow Springs while guarding explosive secrets calls for a critique that balances pacing, emotional stakes, and the rules of your werewolf lore. I will dissect how the three trials escalate tension and reveal Rylan’s growth. Does her relationship with her grandmother feel layered? Do the Pack’s secrets unfold organically, or do twists feel forced? I will flag inconsistencies (e.g., spell mechanics, trial challenges) and highlight moments where character motivations need clarity. Chapter-by-chapter notes will address pacing, while a summary report prioritizes revisions strengthening Rylan’s arc and the town’s hidden threats. Let’s discuss your vision for the Pack’s dynamics and Rylan’s internal conflicts. Ready to refine your story’s bite? Let’s collaborate. ThankYou.

$500 USD en 7 días

4,9

(16 comentarios)

5,6

@carlitanjuguna05

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$400 USD en 4 días

5,0

(10 comentarios)

5,2

@mudassariqbal58

Hello, I am thrilled to present my proposal for beta reading your urban fantasy novel, "Shadow Springs: Wolf Trials." With a rich background in literary analysis and a passion for the urban fantasy genre, I am well-prepared to provide deep insights into your novel's plot and character development. "Shadow Springs: Wolf Trials" promises to be a captivating exploration of identity and belonging, woven into the mysterious and thrilling backdrop of a small North Georgian town teeming with secrets and werewolves. As Rylan grapples with her new-found identity and the daunting trials that will cement her place within the Pack, the story offers rich ground for examining themes of community, secrecy, and self-discovery. I propose to focus my feedback on the coherence and engagement of the plot—ensuring that the narrative drives forward with compelling urgency—and on the depth and relatability of character arcs, particularly Rylan's transformation and her interactions with the Pack. Your story’s unique blend of personal and supernatural challenges provides a perfect framework for a riveting, emotionally resonant journey that will undoubtedly appeal to fans of urban fantasy. I look forward to the opportunity to collaborate with you and help refine "Shadow Springs: Wolf Trials" into a story that resonates deeply with its readers. Best regards, Mudassar

$300 USD en 2 días

4,7

(36 comentarios)

5,0

@monicawriter99

Hi there, This is Monica. I have over 7 years of experience as a proofreader and editor. In my line of work accuracy, speed, and attention to detail are a must! I will help to complete your project on beta reading Being an experienced writer, editor, and proofreader, It belongs to my regular task. I will check PUNCTUATION, SPELLING, SYNTAX, and GRAMMAR ERROR of your edited sentences to ensure accuracy, fluency, and format without changing its core value. You have to mention your word count and need to tell me a specific timeline with your preferred language (UK/US English ). I look forward to working with you. Let's start a conversation to discuss more. Best Regards.

$360 USD en 4 días

5,0

(17 comentarios)

4,5

@Penmate

Hey there! Are there any key plot points or scenes you feel uncertain about and would like me to focus on? How developed are the characters currently? Are there any specific character arcs or relationships you'd like feedback on? Do you want feedback on the world-building aspects of the story, particularly the werewolf lore and town of Shadow Springs? Are there any specific aspects of the protagonist's journey that you feel need more development or clarity?

$300 USD en 7 días

5,0

(10 comentarios)

4,5

@Stopsolution

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$250 USD en 3 días

4,4

(12 comentarios)

3,1

@QuickMentor

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$250 USD en 2 días

4,8

(3 comentarios)

1,8

@Clarxzzz

"Você tem um manuscrito incrível, mas sente que ele pode ser ainda melhor? Eu sou Maria Clara, experiência de leitor beta, e minha missão é garantir que seu livro tenha o maior impacto possível. O que eu ofereço: Leitura detalhada e crítica: Feedback construtivo : Identificação de falhas de coesão e consistência: Sugestões para melhorar a fluidez e esclarecer : Confidencialidade garantida : Se você está buscando um olhar atento e construtivo para levar seu livro ao próximo nível, estou aqui para ajudar. E o melhor: minha abordagem é personalizada para cada autor, garantindo que seu estilo e visão sejam respeitáveis Ofereça uma primeira leitura gratuita de até 4 páginas para que você experimente o tipo de feedback que posso oferecer. Vamos trabalhar juntos para fazer seu projeto brilhar! Entre em contato e vamos começar.

$500 USD en 7 días

0,0

(0 comentarios)

0,0

@amayad456

This book sounds amazing! I’ve worked mainly on fictional story lines and character development so I’d love to work on this with you! Plot twists are also a love of mine and working them smoothly into the story is something I’ve worked on for years. I don’t have much information now for how exactly you’d like this story to go but I’m happy to communicate to make this story the best it can be!

$500 USD en 7 días

0,0

(0 comentarios)

0,0

@Liviter

Hey! How is Waynesboro? Just seen your project and I am really interested to have a put. I am a legal expertise and a writer. Kindly message me for a quality work.

$400 USD en 3 días

0,0

(0 comentarios)

0,0

@SinakoSithole

I am excited to apply for the editing and beta reading position. With 4+ years of experience in writing, editing, and beta reading, I possess a keen eye for detail and a deep understanding of storytelling. My strengths include: - Strong grammatical and punctuation skills - Ability to enhance character development and plot consistency - Effective communication to provide constructive feedback - Familiarity with various genres and writing styles I am confident that my attention to detail, passion for storytelling, and excellent communication skills make me the ideal candidate for this role. I look forward to discussing how I can contribute to refining your manuscript.

$500 USD en 7 días

0,0

(0 comentarios)

0,0

@Bhipakshi

Hi there! As an experienced beta reader, I offer more than just surface-level feedback. I delve deep into your manuscript, providing insightful critiques that help you polish and perfect your work. I focus on the big picture, examining elements like plot, pacing, and character development to ensure your story captivates readers from beginning to end. Beyond grammar and spelling, I identify areas where the narrative flow can be improved, weak spots can be strengthened, and the overall impact of your story can be maximized. My approach is tailored to your unique writing style and the specific requirements of your manuscript. I offer in-depth feedback on character arcs, plot structure, and pacing, employing techniques like character analysis and pacing adjustments to help you craft a truly compelling read. Let's discuss your project – I'd love to hear more about it!

$500 USD en 5 días

0,0

(0 comentarios)

0,0

@SolomonFaris

I would love the opportunity to be a beta reader for Shadow Springs: Wolf Trials. As an avid reader and experienced beta reader with a keen eye for plot development and character arcs, I am excited about the chance to provide detailed, constructive feedback to help refine your novel. Your story’s themes of discovery, belonging, and supernatural intrigue make it a compelling urban fantasy. I will focus on: Plot Consistency – Ensuring the story flows seamlessly and keeps readers engaged. Character Development – Evaluating how Rylan and the supporting characters evolve throughout the story. Pacing & Engagement – Identifying any areas that might need tightening or further development. I understand the importance of preserving your unique voice while offering feedback that strengthens the narrative. My turnaround time is efficient, and I will provide thoughtful insights with actionable suggestions. Let’s bring Shadow Springs: Wolf Trials to its full potential together! Looking forward to discussing this further. Best regards, Dr. Solomon Ali

$300 USD en 10 días

0,0

(0 comentarios)

0,0

@AditiRijal

Hi, I have experience beta reading and editing fanfiction. I am very familiar with the urban fantasy genre and am comfortable working with the kind of story you are writing. Also, I understand that writing is a delicate pursuit and how much the quality and tone of the feedback can affect the process. I plan to be precise and constructive with my feedback. I am confident I can help you channel your ideas into the most compelling version of this story. Looking forward to working with you!

$400 USD en 7 días

0,0

(0 comentarios)

0,0

@nuranchanthila

I’m excited about the opportunity to beta read your novel, Shadow Springs: Wolf Trials. With a focus on urban fantasy, I believe I can provide detailed feedback on both the plot and character development to help you enhance the story and ensure it resonates with readers. Scope of Work: Focus Areas: Plot structure, pacing, character arcs, and overall narrative engagement. Delivery Time: 5 days. Total Cost: $200. Throughout the process, I’ll provide actionable insights to improve the flow of your story and deepen the connection readers will have with the characters. I aim to offer constructive feedback that will help strengthen the overall reading experience

$250 USD en 3 días

0,0

(0 comentarios)

0,0

@ekaw07

$500 USD en 7 días

0,0

(0 comentarios)

0,0

@lukam70

I do not really have experience in beta reading but I have been an avid reader of fiction all my life, books, light novels, etc. you name it. I do not really want to color my experience as many other offers do, what I can do for you is be real with you and your work. If your work has potential I will tell you if it doesn't I will also tell you, same goes with any improvements that it might need, I can offer you proofreading, grammar checking, critical thinking. I will not sugarcoat things just so you pick my proposal. Being real is the best offer I can give you.

$300 USD en 7 días

0,0

(0 comentarios)

0,0

@MariaEdwrd12

Dear Author, I'm writing to express my keen interest in beta reading for you. I've been an avid reader since childhood and enjoy reading fiction and mythology, with a passion for helping authors refine their work. I personally relate to Rylan's experience as an outlier in so many ways, and her yearning to fit in. I would love to read more and offer my ideas on this. I'm particularly interested in beta reading your work because the core ideas and narrative content are intriguing. As a former Potterhead, Twihard (Team Jacob, although Edward is my surname!), and a forever lover of Greek, Norse, and East Asian mythology, I'm beyond excited to apply for this position. Having lived in two countries and being raised with a multicultural background, I believe I'm qualified for this opportunity. I'm available to begin beta reading immediately and am comfortable working with various manuscript formats, such as Word documents and PDFs. I would be thrilled to discuss how I can contribute to the success of your book. Let's connect! Sincerely, Maria Edward

$500 USD en 7 días