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Hello, I've taken a look at your script and read it through to see roughly how far I would get in 60 seconds - I managed around 175 words, which doesn't get as far as explaining how the product works. At it's current length, I think you're looking at a 2-3 minute script. So if I was to work on this for you, unless there's some flexibility where the length of the script is concerned, a lot will need to be cut out to keep it around 60 seconds. For a start, it would make sense to introduce Lee and Lucy at the same time so that you can hit the ground running. Happy to discuss further if you'd like to award me the project. About me: I am UK born and educated, and have received training in proofreading and editing skills from the Society for Editors and Proofreaders (SfEP) and the Publishing Training Centre. I have worked for clients in countries including the US and Australia, and have proofread and edited content for: * Kickstarter campaigns * language learning websites * computer games developers * market research businesses * private healthcare providers * LinkedIn business profiles * real estate and IT blogs You can find more information about me at: [login to view URL] Please also feel welcome to check out my Freelancer profile, or my profile on Elance ([login to view URL]), where you'll see I've received favourable reviews. It would be great if I can be of assistance to you. Best wishes, Gavin

I use the following process to write your script: I learn and fully understand what your business does and the benefits you offer your customers. You will get a script that identifies your customer's problem and how you solve it. A compelling call to action: I write a clear direction on what customers should do when they're ready to move forward, for example: "Talk to us" "Start your project today" "Contact our sales team to find out more". These are all calls to action that get customers knocking on your door. A professionally written voice-over: you can see some scripts I have written. Each video script has a spoken tone is well paced, doesn't rush, and delivers everything that needs to be said, clearly. This is not an accident - I make an initial draft of the voice over and then re-write it over and over until it is perfect - and that's just the first draft you'll see. In summary, you will get a top quality piece of work that tells a good story, has a clear marketing message and lets you produce a great video.

Hi, As a former DISNEY SCRIPTWRITER -- I know exactly how to sell ideas and with your company, it's vital that your prospective clients know they are in "safe hands." Your selling points are security, efficiency, and trust. I would love to discuss this more and give you a professional, high converting script. Once hired, I will make sure that your script is highly compelling, touching on all of your prospects emotional triggers so that it instantly gains attention, ignites desire and provides a clear call to action to generate sales for you. More about me: I'm a SOLID scriptwriter, web writer, and sales person; I've been an arts & entertainment journalist for seven years and have regularly published in the 'Forum' of Fargo, ND (North Dakota and Minnesota are neighboring states) and more. My web clients include: Sprint, Hilton International, Eric Bailey Global. My portfolio range of creativity is one of the most varied on Freelancer.com. This means I know what sells; what becomes successful and why; and I meet deadlines. I believe I can solve your problem! Thanks, Antiq Hawk

Hi, I am an online marketing expert with an abundance of copywriting experience for companies that need to improve web visibility, connect with customers, and boost sales. I am a SEO specialist, take a creative approach to copywriting that emphasizes a professional style, and work until the project is completed to your satisfaction. I can promise you outstanding copy that is compelling, effective, and 100% original. Please contact me to see samples of my work. Thank you!

Hello, As an experienced ad copywriter, I can develop a crisp, catchy and convincing script to complement your 60-sec animation. I have gone through your attached file and I see clarity of concept. All you need is someone to give your concept a polished and precise shape, a task very much in my expertise zone. Please check my profile, portfolio and employer feedback for skill validation. Should you wish to see my jingle/script samples, please contact through the message box and I will send you a couple of files written for Indian clients. Assuring you of a script that's simple, to-the-point and polished to sparkle, I look forward to your response. Regards, Namita Jain

Hi – Thank you for inviting me to bid on your project. I am a native English speaker with a background in business consulting, marketing and IT management. My speciality is writing high quality copy for website content, articles, brochures, technical manuals, eBooks, press releases, case studies and business documents. I do quite a lot of proofreading and editing, and I have also written short scripts like yours and I have edited them for other people. My standard rate is USD $25 / AUD $33 per hour plus the Freelancer site fee and I expect that 1 hour will be sufficient to review and edit your script. I am available to begin immediately and I will deliver your script within 12 hours. Thanks and best wishes, Dan

Greetings !! If you are looking for a writer who produces high-quality content in a short time frame, look no further. I pride myself in providing my clients with top-notch, original content that captures the attention of readers in an informative yet engaging way. I work quickly but strive to ensure that every project I complete is an example of my best work. I'm a highly talented and experienced consultant here to serve your RESEARCH and WRITING needs with high quality, reliable, and efficient results! I'm highly organized and very responsive with project communication. Should we work together, you will feel my commitment to giving you the best service possible! Warm Regards PhD Writing

Hi, I can do a really great job with proofreading and enhancing your script. I currently run my own editing business in the UK where I routinely proof and edit all kinds of texts: essays, dissertations/theses, fiction, articles, etc.. I’ve worked as an editor on two fiction magazines in recent years. Some details about me: - Native English speaker - BA, MA, CELTA qualified - Published novelist, short story writer and poet - Current editing and proof reading service in the UK for several years I have put in a fairly low bid in order to be competitive on Freelancer, but please don't wonder if this will affect the quality of the work. I am dedicated to my business and would be happy to work with you to get the work done by your deadline or sooner. I will: - Check your script for spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors - Assist with flow/clarity where necessary - Assist with the style and language for marketability/saleability (i.e. fit for purpose) - Work to your specifications and deadlines Please consider me for the job. I look forward to hearing from you. David

Hi, I would be delighted to provide you editorial assistance on any weekday (Monday-Friday). I am a certified professional and freelance editor, who has edited, proofread, and formatted written documents, such as books, e-books, journal articles, manuals, recommendation letters, web content, as well as master’s and doctorate dissertations. As a native English speaker from the Philippines and a dependable service provider, I have done extensive editing, proofreading, style reading, as well as formatting of manuscripts, varying in length and subject matter. My editorial experience spans two decades beginning in 1989 and I have been working as a full-time freelance editor by profession since 2008. I hope I could be of help to you. Thank you for taking the time to review my proposal and profile. If you have questions or concerns, just write back and I will respond shortly. Sincerely, Al

Hi, I think your script is a good start. I can make it sound more natural and get your message across effectively. Please contact me if you would lie any more information. Best regards, Georgina.

bid is for rewriting the script into a 60-second promotional material in error-free, fluff-free, plagiarism-free american english. no animation visuals, though, just text.

Thanks for the invitation to bid. I am professionally qualified as a proofreader and have experience at working with a variety of script types, including those written by non native speakers of English. Currently working at university level in communication skills, including writing. I am also experienced in voice over work and have therefore understandings when it comes to scripts of this nature.

Hi, I work in the media industry and write/edit scripts for various projects including commercials, TV, documentaries. I can assist. Do you have a sample of your animation? Your lines are currently a bit long, so there will be too much reading and hard for viewers to pay attention.

Hello, I've read your script and there are some things to be changed. I have a Bachelor's Degree in Translation and Linguistics, and plenty of experience in proofreading and editing. I can start and have it done right now. Looking forward to hearing from you again, Kind regards

I am a full-time freelancer and will have the time and resources to complete and deliver your work to you on time. I used to work as an admin manager in a polytechnic for 7 years and my medium of language is English. I was also educated in English in Singapore.

I would be more than happy to help you out, my friend! I have some experience with script-writing, so I believe I would be able to write what you need, for sure! I'm excited to hear back from you!

Correct grammar and attractive wording is key. Effective communication skills are also extremely helpful.

Hi there, I'm an award winning video producer and I have worked in the industry for a long time. I am mainly doing translation work on here at the moment but I saw your job posting and figured I could be useful. I have written many scripts for this type of video and I would love to help. All the best, Shane

I have edited and proof read articles, essays and scripts for occasions. I love writing and reading and wouldnt have a problem with anything. How I plan to complete my project is to first read the script entirely and then begin editing. If changes are need to be made, I will make sure you agree to them and then do it. With every step of editing, I will make sure you are okay with it. You can contact me by PM and I will try my best to reply at the earliest.

I've done lots of editing for friends and other students. I'm a creative writer with a critical eye. Also English is not only my major in college, but it is my first language. Providing clarity would be quick and easy.

First of all I love researching on the Internet and in magazines. I am semi-retired and can retire fully if I get ample writing assignments. This will benefit you as a customer and means that I can be available any time of the day 24/7. Although my background is in marketing and finance, I have always loved writing and have done thousands of white papers for my employers. I have just started with my copywriting career. In addition I have studied copy writing with one of the best, American Writers And Artists Incorporated that are the most highly rated experts in their field. As a member of theirs, I am doing their B2B program, as well as the Travel Writing program. I have been studying direct copy for years and have read many articles by legendary copywriters. I live in South Africa where there are not many opportunities for freelance writers. Most copywriters are permanently employed. My main interests are playing golf, photography, reading and writing. My English is above standard albeit it U.K. English. I have also studied SEO copywriting and have a better than average idea to improve site ratings. that can assist with any of your requirements.