I'm seeking a freelancer to assist in compiling a comprehensive written document, a novel, or a movie-format script, chronicling my family's history. The story will center around my Mom, Carmel, the central character, and her relationship with a member of the North NJ mob from the 1960s through the 1990s.
My mom was the "Gumad" (mistress) to a successful bookie who went by the name of Billy-boy. Bill was married and stayed married during their time together. Bill made a lot of money during this time and employed several family relatives and friends, and my mom spent the money freely on clothes, shows, parties, gambling, and more. I was an only child, and at times in my early life it seemed as if life was one party after another interspersed with arguments, distrust, etc.
This document will be:
- Organized in a chronological order
- Including a timeline of major events
- Weaving in personal stories and anecdotes
- Complemented with pictures
I have written several disjointed sections to my proposed novel/screenplay but work is needed to flush it out, organize it, add details, add color, add content etc. Here's and example:
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Carmel
This a true story of my Mom's life as a Mafia Princess in the 1960s to the 1990s.
My mom was married shortly after WW2 and moved to a 1st-floor apartment in a house shared with other relatives in Newark. She was 19 and 20 when I was born, her only child, and divorced when she was 27.
I believe she lead an interesting and emotion-filled life that fits in well as relates to Soparno's story, to the the mafioso life. This time told from the point of view of the woman who experienced the highlights and pain of being the girlfriend "Gumod" to a mafioso. My mom supplied the excitement, Billy Boy the money. And for 30 years, with ups and downs, it was a party-all-the-time atmosphere.
Late 50ies to early 60ies:
She was very pretty and young and so attracted a lot of male attention. She also wanted to enjoy the high life. Most of the men attacked to her could not supply that. She also had a big circle of friends and relatives Her brother Carmine “Junior” his first wife Gayle, Stella and Angelo “Winks”, Stella's brothers …
All-night card games, for money, were a weekly occurrence. I'd typically tag along play with my cousins and fall asleep in front of the TV only to be wakened at 4 or 5 AM to go home.
Mom and Dad played a weekly card game with friends. Matty an Marge's house with William “Billy Boy” and his wife Lucky. Bill was a mid-level Mafioso with a winning personality and lots of money to spend. Bill was from the Silver Lake section of Bellville NJ. Bill's boss was Angelo “Gyp” DeCarlo of Mountainside NJ and The Four Season's backer. Bill knew members of the four seasons and also ...
After the divorce Billy Boy, still married, to come around. This was the arely 1960s. I was just reunited with my mom after spending serveral years with my father's sister Helen and her family.
My mother and Bill “dated” for > 30 years. I believe he really loved my mom and loved the exciting party-all-the-time lifestyle she created with his money.
I can remember him handing wads of cash to my mom. She'd count it out in front of him to make sure it was what was promised
One of Bill Boy's associates, and closest friends, was Tommy “Cowboy” Cuomo (related to Mario and Andrew). Tommy was also a bookie and also owned the bar franchise at the Belmont Tavern on Bloomfield Ave.
On several occasions, Bill hinted at his experiences in the mob. Including visiting Cuba in the late 50ies; being present when mob stools were “roughed up”.
Carmel gets arrested
Bill sometimes used our Clifton NJ apartment on Day st as a place to receive and send calls from this “team”. The feds got on to this and bugged our phone line. Billy Boy went away for awhile. But the best and funniest was the arrest of my Mom. This was more than she bargained for. Fortunately, she got the record expunged.
Al's Tavern
in the early70's Bill along with one of his business partners Larry Day purchased Al's tavern on Bloomfield Ave in Bellville. Of course, the deed was in my mom' and Larry's wife's name since neither Bill Larry could chance an audit.
Larry Day was a wise guy's wise guys. Mean and tough, ready to beat up even kill anyone who stood in his way.
I found Larry's daughter to be attractive and I tried to get to know her. Quickly, my Mom told me to stay away from her knowing what a mean SOB Larry was.
A hit on Larry
They owned the tavern for approx 3 years until Larry was found dead with a bullet in the back of his head in the old Charms candy factory on Bloomfield Ave. As far as I know no one has been found guilty of the murder.
Wiring money to Vegas
My mom loved the gilts and glamor. A week in Vegas to see Sinatra or whomever and gambling were the ultimate. Of course, funded by Billy Boy. And a near-infinite supply of money Gambling loses? No problem Billy Boy would wire more funds.
Shore House
Maria Dr, Toms River. Purchased for $30k in the early 70ies and redecorated and expanded my my mom. Bill kept his boat there. Wild parties with more food and drink than could be consumed.
A picture from the Copa Canaba in NYC of my mom and Bill is attached.
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So I'm looking for a writer experienced in Italian mafia-related stories. In particular, a writer interested in mafia-related shows like Good Fellows or The Sopranos. The story is meant to be light-hearted, even comical in sections.
The ideal freelancer would have excellent writing skills, a knack for storytelling, and the ability to work with visual materials. Experience in writing biographies or historical documents would be highly beneficial.
Hello,
I have carefully read your project description and understand that you are looking for a skilled professional to assist in compiling a comprehensive written document chronicling your family's history, specifically centered around your mother's intriguing relationship with a member of the North NJ mob from the 1960s through the 1990s.
Here’s how I plan to approach your project: I will meticulously organize the content in a chronological order, weave in personal stories and anecdotes, and incorporate visual materials to enhance the storytelling experience. My focus will be on capturing the essence of the era, highlighting the emotional highs and lows of your mother's life as a Mafia Princess, and infusing a light-hearted and comical tone where appropriate.
With my background in crafting engaging narratives and my interest in mafia-related stories like Goodfellas and The Sopranos, I am confident in my ability to bring your family's history to life in a captivating and entertaining manner. I look forward to collaborating with you to create a compelling and memorable document that reflects the unique experiences of your family.
Best regards,
Rabia Shaikh
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I'm ready to help bring your family's fascinating story to life by transforming the disjointed sections into a cohesive and engaging narrative. I’ll organize the material chronologically, incorporating your mom's experiences with the mafia world, the highs, and the lows, to create a compelling document or script. I'll enhance the storytelling by adding details, color, and personal anecdotes, ensuring it resonates with readers. I'll also work with any pictures you want to include, creating a seamless blend of text and visuals to capture the essence of your family's history.
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Hi, As a seasoned storyteller and creative writer, I'm more than ready to bring your family history to life. Your project is unique and full of potential, and it's exactly the type of challenge I excel in. With a deep understanding of the human condition, I can relate to your mother's story on an emotional level that will be palpable in my writing. I value the connections found within families, no matter how complicated, and strive to portray them accurately and sensitively.
My background in both fiction and memoirs means that I have the perfect blend of narrative skills needed to put together a comprehensive account of your family's past. I know how to weave personal stories, utilize captivating anecdotes, set up chronological structures, and provide a sense of context with well-researched timelines. Moreover, I'll go the extra mile by complementing all this information with relevant pictures for added depth and insight.
But beyond just documenting your family's history, my ultimate goal is for readers to be as captivated by the story as they would be with The Sopranos. This comes from artfully adding details, colors, and content to really flesh out your vision - which is precisely where my gift for transforming concepts into engaging narratives comes in handy.
I'm excited about this project because it’s much more than just writing for me; it’s about doing justice to the rich tapestry of your family's lives through my words.
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Hi, Every family has a story, and telling that story in the right way can make it unforgettable. I specialize in turning personal histories into compelling narratives, and I’m excited to help you tell your family’s unique story. With my experience in writing memoirs and scripts, I’m confident I can craft a narrative that truly brings your mom’s life, her relationship with Billy-boy, and the unforgettable moments you shared to life.
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I will create a timeline of major events and pair it with personal stories, giving the reader a clear sense of time and place. I'll also incorporate photos to help visualize the memories and moments that matter most. With a clear structure and attention to detail, I’ll ensure the story is easy to follow while still being deeply meaningful.
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As an experienced writer with a decade of creative storytelling under my belt, I am the ideal fit for your family history documentation project. I have a knack for breathing life into manuscripts by organizing them chronologically and adding detail, color, and emotional depth. This is evident in my ability to transform disjointed sections into compelling narratives that keep readers engrossed from beginning to end.
Drawing on my extensive writing experience covering a multitude of genres, I'm particularly intrigued by your mother's unique perspective as a "Gumad" to a member of the North NJ mob. I believe I can sensitively portray her complex relationship with "Billy-Boy" while capturing the party-all-the-time atmosphere of that era. My work will ensure your family's history comes alive in ways that resonate emotionally.
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Dear Hiring Manager,
I am thrilled at the opportunity to work on your project chronicling the intriguing family history of your Mom, Carmel, and her entanglement with the North NJ mob. With over a decade of experience in Article Writing, Creative Writing, and Ghostwriting, I am well-equipped to bring this captivating story to life.
I am adept at organizing narratives in a chronological order, weaving in personal anecdotes, and enhancing content with visual elements like pictures. My passion for storytelling, particularly in mafia-related themes akin to Goodfellas and The Sopranos, aligns perfectly with the tone you envision for this project.
Your project demands a writer who can infuse light-heartedness and humor into the narrative, while also delving into the complexities of Carmel's life as a Mafia Princess. My experience in creating engaging, character-driven stories will ensure that the essence of Carmel's experiences shines through in a compelling and authentic manner.
I am excited about the prospect of collaborating with you to flesh out and enhance the existing sections of your proposed novel/screenplay. Let's work together to create a captivating and memorable account of Carmel's life that resonates with readers and viewers alike.
Thank you for considering my proposal. I look forward to the opportunity to contribute to this fascinating project.
Warm regards,
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I'm Stanley, a versatile and experienced writer with a solid background in diverse writing styles, including creative writing and ghostwriting. Your family history project intrigues me because it encompasses elements of both fiction and non-fiction narratives. My proficiency in weaving engaging stories while ensuring accurate, well-researched content would be a significant asset in bringing your story, centered around your Mom's intertwined life with the mob, to life.
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