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I´m feeling so empty
Could you please say anything and stay with me?
Lost for words, I am nothing,
still sitting in the shadows of a life i used to live
I won´t remember more than yesterday
but with every breath I learn to breath again
Could you please say anything and stay with me?
Lost for words, I am nothing,
still sitting in the shadows of a life i used to live
I won´t remember more than yesterday
but with every breath I learn to breath again
i lost my skill to describe my feelings, i never was a good writer, but this is really bad >.<
© 2011 - 2025 wispered
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This isn't bad. It's honest. Short, blunt, and honest. And For as long as I've followed you, that's one of the things I most enjoyed about your writing, L. I think you're being far too hard on yourself. You're sooooo much better, and worth sooooooooooooooo much more than you give yourself credit for right now.
Do you want to talk? Like actually sit down and talk to someone? I could give you my email, or my MSN. I care about you - and I just hate seing people I care for in pain, and believing they're alone. I promise you, you're not. If you don't want to be.
- Matt
Do you want to talk? Like actually sit down and talk to someone? I could give you my email, or my MSN. I care about you - and I just hate seing people I care for in pain, and believing they're alone. I promise you, you're not. If you don't want to be.
- Matt