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I try

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I try



the leaves are circling my tread-bare tires

blowing around like a crowd rushed in

proclaiming “wait” and “go” and “what” and

“we are all here”



there is a certain shade of rose fog

on the mountains

reading me the chapters

of epochs ending



and I do not want

to hate



so I go out to breathe in lungfuls, pen in hand

and document:

the flavor of the burn

the stars that swim when I stand up

the deadening of my eyes



but I don’t cough



and you tell me I am wrong

about

the fog, the source,

the way it moves

through me

the way

I move

though it



you tell me

it is only ever either night

or day

and you tell me

always/never



do you know?



I would burn down everything

to see my horizons again

to feel the morning dew in my own mind



do you know?



I would write my oaths into my skin

in flowers

and not care

how you judge them





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GersifGalsana's avatar

Hello again. Beautiful words. And it's important to find what exists for you and not allow what exists for others to interfere with this. Fog is often a protection. It wraps round fear and pain and despair and loss. You can peel it away in little bits to find that ancient way you were and still can be if you see the fog as a friend that is no longer needed for so much protection. Just walk beside it as it walks beside you but you can decide what and when to wrap and obfuscate. Even if it still happens, nothing changes what was and that includes what you are and were and will be through everything that is between always and never and between day and night. That other fog that kills what is beautiful disperses as you learn not to fear its power and it does have huge power. It can kill and it can wound and it can blot out the world. It can create shadows and hills and stones in the soul's landscape. Often this is because you are not strong against it. It still has power. It still tears silently and erodes and blurs. And threatens. This is a brutal and terrible world wearing beautiful clothes. It is as much a victim as any of us. It succumbs and it arises in an endless cycle. Fog is often the only way to blunt its blades or cause us to lose our sense of wonder and inclusion.



But you should bear in mind that words have wings.