Danny's Pokemon Gold nuzlocke adventure Part 1

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Part 1 of my nuzlocke adventure in the original Pokémon Gold.
This is entirely done with Ms Paint, and I plan on keeping it that way for a while...
It's a tad on the short side, but the next submission will be longer.

BTW, Prof. Elm is so badass, on the contrary to what others might believe.
And, whaddayaknow? A female starter. That's something you don't see everyday!

That being said, I think this looks a bit amaturish. I'd love some positive criticism!

NOTE TO ANY WHO NOTICED: I placed this same chapter on the Nuzlocke Forum, and on the Vizzed boards. Recognition as original artist confirmed. Like A Boss. B)