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Guys.... it's a coyote... not a wolf...

redraw of a pic I did for ~AshachuLover for xmas last year [link] I would have changed the design to his current sona but its also for the draw it again contest DA is having so.... I kept it.

I'm super happy with how it came out, every detail of it X3

please crit! it would be loads of help <3

filled out meme: [link]
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

It's late at night and I have nothing to do, so why not write up a critique? ;D

First off, I don't know why but I REALLY like the tress! They have a somewhat realistic essence to them and I felt that they were done very well. The detail in the rock is also nice, you can see all the folds and creases and it is done beautifully. I also like how you did the shadow under the wolf too. It looks good and gives it more of that 'realistic feel'.

Now about the paws, I would say they are a little big and miss shaped. I think it would also be good if the actual toes were more defined since you cannot see them very well. I'm also a little unsure about the mouth. Anatomically speaking, I don't really see to much wrong going there however I am unsure of what the wolf or dog is supposed to be doing. Usually the mouth would open that wide if they were yawning, however I really do like how you drew the mouth and then angle of the head.

Snow tends to me a little more messy than how you have drawn it here. Snow tents to get caught in little cracks such as in the tress and in the cracks in the rock. It would make more sense if there were some more scattered snow. Clouds also tend to be a little messier, however the sky looks beautiful despite this.

This is a really lovely piece overall! Sorry if this critique is bad, I'm tired as all.