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Note delivery

Published: Sep 20, 2010

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Description

Well how did you think notes got delivered?
Some complicated electronic process, no, 'fraid not, deviantart secretly employs emoticons to deliver all your notes!!!

hope you like it

+ added a shadow (i can't ever remember doing a shadow effect before!!)

Image size

32x31px 3.54 KB

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BlissfullySarcastic

Sep 26, 2010

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^{Critique tiems yay!

Positives first.
Perspective on this...amazing. I love how it jumps forward and to the left and falls backwards and to the right. Brings it into the third dimension. IT'S LIKE I CAN TOUCH IT. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/>
The smoothness of the animation adds to it. Did a great job on that as well. c:
The shading's cool too. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/> Me like. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod"/> The expression is well suited for the emote.

NEGATIVES.
The hands don't seem to match the emote. Probably didn't pick a dark enough color for the bottom left. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="LOL"/> Speaking of, the hands seem strange. I think they should come forward and in front of the emote as it jumps forward, so it doesn't just look like it's going left and right for no reason.
The note...can't really tell what it was to begin with. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="LOL"/> Try shading it differently, is my best suggestion.

Overall, I love it. Just needs a bit of work. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod"/>}