MaddieJK

im having a really hard time trying to give you your oc training critique in your gallery at the bottom XD

this is for you and I hope it helps!.




Dear MaddieJk,I enjoyed working with you guys for this whole round.I will try my best to give good feedback although am inexperienced in this.

impressions: -in the guess who task Lapis is pretty easy to guess she is a princess when you see her throne, yet her powers seemed very pretty looking which i thought was ice magic right away, until i read the comments section after the task was finished her history is interesting for the most part my focus was right on the powers and viruses having a part in jeweloid powers i think thats cool and a neat idea.
my favorite pictures of her are these www.deviantart.com/maddiejk/ar… and www.deviantart.com/maddiejk/ar…
character- Lapis is a very strong woman with her position in society yet even as a person her desire for love is relateable and natural. like able yet want to see more of her other side to her life, with her time along without her man what are those times like?.

Colors- you seem to have much knowledge of use of cool colors in yourworks displaying lapis, and human anatomy is fluid and warm feeling, nice job!.

Art- the blues attract the eye,my suggestion to a small anatomy detail concerning the eyes on males and females is they can use more variation in their shapes as they do look similar to each other its a bit hard to tell her emotions a bit.
shading is good yet you could go even darker to make more stand out when lapis is in the picture it would really  make her pop!.

Thank you so much for the watch!