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cloud forest (napo 2)

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April 27, 2024
cloud forest by KiriHearts
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Beautiful from a distance, I would have you

Stay far

Let no one close enough to see the way your eyes lift

When you smile



You straddle erosion and decay

balance on the edge of a landslide

But no one comes to throw nets over your latest tumble

Or snare your slip-stray rocks

And so you reform again,

A new pinnacle,

That much closer to the sea

(half) napowrimo, day 1! posted late!



just some musings about my commute over the mountains. this is not very complete but gotta move on.



poem 2 for @NaPoWriMo

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The last few lines leave a strong impression (especially those)