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And so we end this long, but necessary review process. I honestly wasn't sure of how feasible it would be to do this with the amount of work I already have...but that seems to be the case with me 
I'm really surprised with the way I was able to solve this page in particullar, since it was by far the most changed of the entire comic, losing half of what it was before, fortunately 
. To solve it, we have had to radically change certain aspects of the script, especially everything regarding Flaky knowing about a place called "Komodo Island" (which we will have the time to introduce and explore properly in the next chapter). New, shorter dialogues that actually help us move the story, rather than just complicating things further.
It's not perfect, considering the 24 pannel monster that was the original, but for being the best we could do, I think it's not too bad. It was very cruel to have left the story in such a cliffhanger...but I think we are finally ready to try it at least one last time. We are still not sure when we will start posting the new pages, but we will make sure to keep you informed.
Thank you so much for reading. We hope to have you with us very soon, for chapter 5
I'm really surprised with the way I was able to solve this page in particullar, since it was by far the most changed of the entire comic, losing half of what it was before, fortunately . To solve it, we have had to radically change certain aspects of the script, especially everything regarding Flaky knowing about a place called "Komodo Island" (which we will have the time to introduce and explore properly in the next chapter). New, shorter dialogues that actually help us move the story, rather than just complicating things further.It's not perfect, considering the 24 pannel monster that was the original, but for being the best we could do, I think it's not too bad. It was very cruel to have left the story in such a cliffhanger...but I think we are finally ready to try it at least one last time. We are still not sure when we will start posting the new pages, but we will make sure to keep you informed.
Thank you so much for reading. We hope to have you with us very soon, for chapter 5
CHAPTER 5: COVER
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YAY THE MOLE! HE LOOKS AWESOME