EMOBUTTERFLY44

Hey all you guys you should follow me on tumblr too!!!! My tumblr name is Zexions4life Here's a link to my page =) http://zexions4life.tumblr.com/

Ok so i'm supposed to write a 5 page fictional stor for my creative writing class and I wrote it but it's only like not even 4 pages -_-" suggestions on what I could add to it? … this is my story so far…                                                       Shapes        There are thorns everywhere. She is unable to make a move unless she wants to be covered in scratches. She is a seventeen year old girl with long jet black hair and icy blue eyes. She hears the sound of a twig snapping and becomes frightened. Some bushes nearby begin to shake and she lets out a sigh of relief when she sees that it is only a deer. She stares in fear and awe...