dogsledfee

Hi do you accept a story about character from video game

I've skimmed through most of your post. Some have... Unique choice of aspect that definitely related to BP stuff. While I found it cliché, it is what it is. Can't say I dislike em either since it's what'd you expected in these type of stories and I do found some have decent story telling narrative.

However, I've also noticed you lacked proper build up and just goes straight into the stuff that make it either fall flat, or wasn't as interesting as the idea supposed to be. Plus, some of it feel sudden or forced so the delivery doesn't seem to connect on what you're trying to convey although I somewhat can see what you're aiming at when using the characters background or interaction.

Hopefully I wasn't too blunt on that, but adding proper detail and separate the paragraphs to smaller chunks will make the flow much clearer for your stories since I think plot is your strong point, just need a better delivery phrasing since it's an okay read overall.

That said. I do have some bp related ideas, not sure where to start tho. But how about... Giantess trope? I don't like Vore, but it's an interesting take for their size doesn't matter in hardness around the stomach area. Fantasy or supernatural setting might work well here.

Other than that... Maybe a setting of a misunderstanding of someone mistaken as some sort of wish granter dude and must be offered a female offering for their wish to be granted and he just give up correcting it would be interesting to experiment around.

That said, hopefully my comment didn't bore you or feel too blunt. Have a nice day or night when you're reading this man.

If you guys have any great idea about belly-punching story just post it up here, I might consider writing the full story based on those ideas. Thank you so much!