Comment on Judeau by DontFeedTheAxel

Cyantre's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Though I am unfamiliar with the anime character you are drawing here, I like the colors of this piece. The background has a nice blurred and abstract feel to it, and that in a way accentuates the character more. The profile pose seems a bit awkward though, only because it so straight. Perhaps if he were angled just slightly it would give a more realistic impression, because for me the piece looks a bit too "Alfred Hitchcock Presents", if you know what I mean. The colors are good, though there is one line on the neck that seem a bit off, especially from this pose. It looks as if his head could slide off his neck because of how angled that one line is. Other than those few things I think this is decent piece of fan art, good job.
DontFeedTheAxel's avatar
thank you very much for your critique :D
and i totally agree with you. i did the character too technical and with too little feel for it or creativity. looks way to stiff^^ but im working on this. thanks^^
Cyantre's avatar
Glad you like the critique and found it helpful.