Deviation Actions
The pose you've created here is quite believable, and provides a very good sense of action. The character design also makes 'sense,' and the use of red to contrast with the greys was well done. The thing that gets me though with this particular piece is actually the background. At first, I looked straight at the red line coming from the character ( top right middle ). Then, the two swords led my eye to the top left corner, and there was nothing there. So, ultimately I feel if you incorporated more of those red lines in that specific area (
maybe starting from the top sword and going down in a circular fashion towards the character's right leg would do the trick ), it might create more dynamic eye movement, where the eye would go from that top sword to the foot of that right leg. With that said, nice work!