Paper Princess Narcissa

Picture 3/25 of Princess Narcissa, only 22 pictures left until she can have her own folder at #marioslostgirls

Edit: This is more of a concept picture than anything, THE COMPLETED FINAL VERSION IS HERE

Just for fun, here's a Mary Sue test for Narcissa


[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong.
[x] They have a rare hair/fur color
[x] Their eyes are an unusual color Her eyes are dark blue, leaning toward purple, but they are actually just blue
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[x] They are immortal. Sort of, she can die, but not by ordinary means
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. -
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet Technically she has a special power, but she knows about it so I won't count this one
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
[] They are a healer.
[x] They are from a very rich/royal family.
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents Actually Narcissa doesn't have parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They look much younger/older than they really areShe looks 22 but technically she is ageless.
[X] They are currently in a relationship But its another OC, so I don't know if it really counts
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows.
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age/at some point
[] They have a wife/husband/fiance that they were separated from/was killed
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain label.
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared.
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[x] They are from a different country to where they live She's Dream
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy Yes
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
[] They are from a long line of Of what?
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
[] They have insomnia

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless

Final Scores:

Narcissa- 6 points

0-5 Anti-Sue/Stu
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

Narcissa is proudly not a Sue, a 'well balanced and interesting character' way to go Narcissa!