Aelorn

Don't get me wrong! I love it the way it is!

This is a beautiful tale of heroism, forgiveness, betrayal and maybe even a little bit of loss. This feels like a fully fleshed out story with a whole world of characters and places, but at the same time, nothing is missing, and the reader is left satisfied at the conclusion.

While the story of the golem is an old folktale that many have at least heard mentioned, you kept it very original, and gave your own flair. The work evokes strong responses, and the reader wants to hate the tyrant for abusing his (or her) power over the people in such a horrible way.

All in all, a very well rounded work.

This is an interesting concept. The simplistic color scheme and lack of shading draw attention to this piece when it might otherwise be ignored.

Unfortunately, the words "My Chemical Romance" are very difficult to read at first as many of the letters connect and bleed together. The image itself also does not seem to relate to the band all that much. As a fan of the band, I have to honestly say that exempting the words, this image does not even remotely make me think of any of the band members, their music, or their lyrics.

I wish you luck in all future endeavors.

I understand that this is intended to be an emotive portrait, but all of the digital editing detracts from the emotion to the point that I'm not even sure what the emotion is supposed to be.

The tears overemphasize sadness to an irritating extent, and make the image seem clownish and silly instead of serious. The bright blue eyes add a feeling of terror (or something else monster related). The words are the the strongest point of emotion for this, which seems to be loneliness; however, it doesn't fit with anything else in the portrait.

Originality is low because this is a very common pose in photography. In the future, I would suggest using a model or tripod to achieve more a more interesting dynamic.