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Fix incomplete sentences #5741
Fix incomplete sentences #5741
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LGTM with two nits.
docs/start/basics.ipynb
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"Another example is the 3-qubit Toffoli gate, which is equivalent to a controlled-controlled-X gate. Many devices do not support a three qubit gate, so it is important " | |||
"Another example is the 3-qubit Toffoli gate, which is equivalent to a controlled-controlled-X gate. Many devices do not support a three qubit gate, so it is important to decompose this into one and two qubit gates." |
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Suggestion:
Many devices do not support three qubit gates, so it is important to decompose them into one and two qubit gates.
(Removes "a", changes "gate" to "gates" and "this" to "them".)
docs/start/basics.ipynb
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"## Next steps\n", | |||
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"After completing this tutorial, you should be able to use gates and operations to construct your own quantum circuits, simulate them, and to use sweeps. It should give you a brief idea of the commonly used \n", | |||
"After completing this tutorial, you should be able to use gates and operations to construct your own quantum circuits, simulate them, and to use sweeps.\n", |
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Suggestion: use "to" (as in "to do") consistently in each item on the list:
"to construct your own quantum circuits, to simulate them, and to use sweeps."
(Adds "to" in front of "simulate".)
Fixing #5734