Skip to content
New issue

Have a question about this project? Sign up for a free GitHub account to open an issue and contact its maintainers and the community.

By clicking “Sign up for GitHub”, you agree to our terms of service and privacy statement. We’ll occasionally send you account related emails.

Already on GitHub? Sign in to your account

docs: Add sequence diagram for xDS error_detail NACK example #15795

Merged
merged 6 commits into from
Apr 2, 2021

Conversation

eric846
Copy link
Contributor

@eric846 eric846 commented Mar 31, 2021

Signed-off-by: eric846 56563761+eric846@users.noreply.github.com

Commit Message: docs: Add sequence diagram for xDS error_detail NACK example
Additional Description: n/a
Risk Level: Low: doc formatting
Testing: n/a
Docs Changes: converted text to a diagram
Release Notes: n/a
Platform Specific Features: n/a

eric846 added 2 commits March 31, 2021 16:52
Signed-off-by: eric846 <56563761+eric846@users.noreply.github.com>
Signed-off-by: eric846 <56563761+eric846@users.noreply.github.com>
@eric846 eric846 marked this pull request as ready for review March 31, 2021 21:10
Signed-off-by: eric846 <56563761+eric846@users.noreply.github.com>
S->C: {resources={A}, version=1, nonce=1}
C->S: {resource_names={A}, version=1, nonce=1 (this is an ACK)}
C->S: {resource_names={A, B}, version=1, nonce=1}
Note over C: adding subscription\nto B
Copy link
Member

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

I think in all the "Note over"s that they are below the line they are referring to. E.g. here, the addition of subscription to B by the client happens in the line above when {A, B} is sent.

Copy link
Contributor Author

@eric846 eric846 Apr 2, 2021

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

Rearranged these to be clearer now.

Copy link
Member

@htuch htuch left a comment

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

Thanks @eric846, this should help clarify, just one nit.
/wait

Signed-off-by: eric846 <56563761+eric846@users.noreply.github.com>
eric846 added 2 commits April 2, 2021 10:01
Signed-off-by: eric846 <56563761+eric846@users.noreply.github.com>
Signed-off-by: eric846 <56563761+eric846@users.noreply.github.com>
Copy link
Member

@htuch htuch left a comment

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

LGTM, thanks!

@htuch htuch merged commit 4035f2a into envoyproxy:main Apr 2, 2021
Sign up for free to join this conversation on GitHub. Already have an account? Sign in to comment
Labels
None yet
Projects
None yet
Development

Successfully merging this pull request may close these issues.

2 participants