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diff --git a/R/dat_proc.R b/R/dat_proc.R
@@ -26,17 +26,17 @@ trgsmetric <- structure(
       "Protect existing artificial reefs; enhance habitat complexity where feasible; expand reef area to promote fish and wildlife benefits",
       "Identify and protect existing tidal flats; assess restoration potential of other non-vegetated subtidal areas",
       "Protect existing seagrasses; assess restoration potential of non-vegetated subtidal areas",
-      "2030: Protect existing oysters and restore 20 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each out-decade",
-      "2030: Construct 1.6 kilometers each year; better define opportunity areas; increase target to 2.4 and 3.2 kilometers per year for out decades",
-      "2030: Protect existing intertidal mosaic and restore 405 hectares; increase target by 61 hectares each out-decade; includes the mosaic of mangrove, salt barren, and salt marsh habitats",
+      "2030: Protect existing oysters and restore 20 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each decade",
+      "2030: Construct 1.6 kilometers each year; better define opportunity areas; increase target to 2.4 and 3.2 kilometers per year for each decade",
+      "2030: Protect existing intertidal mosaic and restore 405 hectares; increase target by 61 hectares each decade; includes the mosaic of mangrove, salt barren, and salt marsh habitats",
       "Protect existing mangrove forests; restore opportunistically within the intertidal mosaic",
-      "2030: Protect existing salt barrens and restore 20 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares per out decade",
-      "2030: Protect existing low salinity salt marshes and restore 101 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each out-decade",
-      "Inventory mapped tidal tributaries and identify restoration potential; restore 6.4 kilometers of urban tidal creek habitat where feasible; increase target by 3.2 kilometers per out decade",
-      "2030: Protect existing coastal uplands and restore 61 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each out decade",
-      "2030: Protect existing non-forested freshwater wetlands and restore 546 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each out decade",
-      "2030: Protect existing forested freshwater wetlands and restore 61 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each out decade",
-      "2030: Protect existing native uplands and restore 182 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each out decade; focus on pine flatwoods and protect current extent"
+      "2030: Protect existing salt barrens and restore 20 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each decade",
+      "2030: Protect existing low salinity salt marshes and restore 101 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each decade",
+      "Inventory mapped tidal tributaries and identify restoration potential; restore 6.4 kilometers of urban tidal creek habitat where feasible; increase target by 3.2 kilometers each decade",
+      "2030: Protect existing coastal uplands and restore 61 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each decade",
+      "2030: Protect existing non-forested freshwater wetlands and restore 546 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each decade",
+      "2030: Protect existing forested freshwater wetlands and restore 61 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each decade",
+      "2030: Protect existing native uplands and restore 182 hectares; increase target by 20 hectares each decade; focus on pine flatwoods and protect current extent"
     )
   ),
   class = "data.frame",

diff --git a/R/tabs.R b/R/tabs.R
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@ totab <- tibble(
 )
 
 thm <- function(x){
-  flextable::width(x, width = 1.75, j = 1) %>%
-    flextable::width(width = 4.75, j = 2) %>%
+  flextable::width(x, width = 2.25, j = 1) %>%
+    flextable::width(width = 4.25, j = 2) %>%
     # flextable::width(width = 2.75, j = 7) %>%
     fontsize(size = 8, part = 'all') %>%
     flextable::padding(padding = 0, part = 'all')

diff --git a/data/trgsmetric.RData b/data/trgsmetric.RData
diff --git a/manu-draft.docx b/manu-draft.docx
diff --git a/manu-draft.qmd b/manu-draft.qmd
diff --git a/refs.bib b/refs.bib
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ @article{Baldwin38
 
 @techreport{Kawula18,
 author = {Kawula, R. and Redner, J.},
-institution = {Center for Spatial Analysis, Fish and Widlife Research Institute, Florida Fish and Wildlife Conservation Commission, Tallahassee, Florida},
+institution = {{Center for Spatial Analysis, Fish and Widlife Research Institute, Florida Fish and Wildlife Conservation Commission, Tallahassee, Florida}},
 number = {Final Report},
 title = {{F}lorida {L}and {C}over {C}lassification {S}ystem},
 year = {2018},
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ @article{Houde93
 @incollection{Kushlan90,
 address = {Orlando, Florida},
 author = {Kushlan, J.A.},
-booktitle = {Ecosystems of Florida},
+booktitle = {Ecosystems of {F}lorida},
 editor = {Myers, R.L. and Ewel, J.J.},
 pages = {324-363},
 publisher = {University of Central Florida Press},
@@ -95,15 +95,15 @@ @article{Sprandel00
 journal = {Journal of Field Ornithology},
 number = {4},
 pages = {708-720},
-title = {Distribution of wintering shorebirds in coastal Florida},
+title = {Distribution of wintering shorebirds in coastal {F}lorida},
 volume = {71},
 year = {2000},
 }
 
 @article{AvilaGarcia20,
 author = {\'{A}vila-Garc\'{i}a, D. and Morat\'{o}, J. and P\'{e}rez-Mauss\'{a}n, A. I. and Santill\'{a}n-Carvantes, P. and Alvarado, J. and Comin FA.},
 journal = {Ecosystem Services},
-title = {Impacts of alternative land-use policies on water ecosystem services in the Rio Grande de Comitan-Lagos de Montebello watershed, Mexico},
+title = {Impacts of alternative land-use policies on water ecosystem services in the {R}io {G}rande de {C}omitan-{L}agos de {M}ontebello watershed, {M}exico},
 volume = {45},
 year = {2020},
 url = {https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ecoser.2020.101179},
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ @article{Calil15
 journal = {PLoS One},
 number = {7},
 pages = {e0132651},
-title = {Aligning natural resource conservation and flood hazard mitigation in California},
+title = {Aligning natural resource conservation and flood hazard mitigation in {C}alifornia},
 volume = {10},
 year = {2015},
 url = {https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0132651},
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ @article{Menendez18
 author = {Men\'{e}ndez, P. and Losada, I. J. and Beck, M. W. and Torres-Ortega, S. and Espejo, A. and Narayan, S. and D\'{i}az-Simal, P. and Lange, G.},
 journal = {Ecosystem Services},
 pages = {24-36},
-title = {Valuing the protection services of mangroves at national scale: The Philippines},
+title = {Valuing the protection services of mangroves at national scale: The {P}hilippines},
 volume = {34(A)},
 year = {2018},
 url = {https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ecoser.2018.09.005},
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ @article{Dontis20
 author = {Dontis, E. E. and Radabaugh, K. R. and Chappel, A. R. and Russo, C. E. and Moyer, R.P.},
 journal = {Estuaries and Coasts},
 pages = {1470-1488},
-title = {Carbon storage increases with site age as created salt marshes transition to mangrove forests in Tampa Bay, Florida (USA)},
+title = {Carbon storage increases with site age as created salt marshes transition to mangrove forests in {T}ampa {B}ay, {F}lorida ({USA})},
 volume = {43},
 year = {2020},
 url = {https://doi.org/10.1007/s12237-020-00733-0},
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ @techreport{Robison20
 author = {Robison, D. and Ries, T. and Saarinen, J. and Tomasko, D. and Sciarrino, C.},
 institution = {Tampa Bay Estuary Program, St. Petersburg, Florida},
 number = {#07-20},
-title = {Tampa Bay Estuary Program: 2020 Habitat Master Plan Update},
+title = {{Tampa Bay Estuary Program: 2020 Habitat Master Plan Update}},
 type = {Technical report},
 year = {2020},
 url = {https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Hp0l_qtbxp1JxKJoGatdyuANSzQrpL0I/view?usp=drivesdk},
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ @article{Titus09
 journal = {Environmental Research Letters},
 number = {4},
 pages = {044008},
-title = {State and local governments plan for development of most land vulnerable to rising sea level along the {US} Atlantic coast},
+title = {State and local governments plan for development of most land vulnerable to rising sea level along the {US} {A}tlantic coast},
 volume = {4},
 year = {2009},
 url = {https://doi.org/10.1088/1748-9326/4/4/044008},
@@ -341,14 +341,14 @@ @techreport{EPA96
 author = {{Environmental Protection Agency}},
 institution = {Office of Water (4501F)},
 number = {EPA 840-S-96-001},
-title = {Watershed Approach Framework},
+title = {{W}atershed {A}pproach {F}ramework},
 year = {1996},
 }
 
 @inproceedings{Henningsen05,
 address = {St. Petersburg, FL},
 author = {Henningsen, B.},
-booktitle = {Proceedings of the Tampa Bay Area Scientific Information Symposium (BASIS 4)},
+booktitle = {Proceedings of the {Tampa} {Bay} {Area} {Scientific} {Information} {Symposium} ({BASIS} 4)},
 editor = {Treat, S..F},
 pages = {165-170},
 publisher = {Tampa Bay Estuary Program},
@@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ @article{Lamb18
 @incollection{Jaap90,
 address = {Orlando, Florida, USA},
 author = {Jaap, W. C. and Hallock, P.},
-booktitle = {Ecosystems of Florida},
+booktitle = {Ecosystems of {F}lorida},
 editor = {Myers, R.L. and Ewel, J. J.},
 pages = {574-618},
 publisher = {University of Central Florida Press},
@@ -508,11 +508,11 @@ @incollection{Jaap90
 @inproceedings{Ash05,
 address = {St. Petersburg, Florida},
 author = {Ash, T. and Runnels, R.},
-booktitle = {Proceedings of the Tampa Bay Area Scientific Information Symposium (BASIS 4)},
+booktitle = {Proceedings of the {T}ampa {B}ay {A}rea {S}cientific {I}nformation {S}ymposium ({BASIS} 4)},
 editor = {Treat, S.F.},
 pages = {179-182},
 publisher = {Tampa Bay Estuary Program},
-title = {Hard bottom habitats an overview of mapping and monitoring needs on epibenthic communities in {T}ampa {B}ay, {F}lorida},
+title = {Hard bottom habitats: an overview of mapping and monitoring needs on epibenthic communities in {T}ampa {B}ay, {F}lorida},
 year = {2005},
 }
 
@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ @article{zuErmgassen13
 @incollection{Odum90,
 address = {Orlando, Florida},
 author = {Odum, W. E. and McIvor, C. C.},
-booktitle = {Ecosystems of Florida},
+booktitle = {Ecosystems of {F}lorida},
 editor = {Myers, R. L. and Ewel, J. J.},
 pages = {517-548},
 publisher = {University of Central Florida Press},
@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ @article{Berntness85
 author = {Bertness, M. D.},
 journal = {Ecology},
 pages = {1042-1055},
-title = {Fiddler Crab Regulation of \textit{Spartina alterniflora} production on a {N}ew {E}ngland salt marsh},
+title = {Fiddler Crab Regulation of \textit{{S}partina alterniflora} production on a {N}ew {E}ngland salt marsh},
 volume = {66},
 year = {1985},
 }
@@ -627,7 +627,7 @@ @techreport{Sherwood08
 author = {Sherwood, E.},
 institution = {Tampa Bay Estuary Program, St. Petersburg, Florida},
 number = {#02-08},
-title = {Tampa Bay tidal tributary habitat initiative: integrated summary document, {T}ampa {B}ay {E}stuary {P}rogram Tidal Tributaries Project Team},
+title = {Tampa {B}ay tidal tributary habitat initiative: integrated summary document, {T}ampa {B}ay {E}stuary {P}rogram Tidal Tributaries Project Team},
 type = {Technical Report},
 year = {2008},
 }
@@ -654,7 +654,7 @@ @article{Wessel22
 author = {Wessel, M. R. and Leverone, J. R. and Beck, M. W. and Sherwood, E. T. and Hecker, J. and West, S. and Janicki, T. A.},
 journal = {Estuaries and Coasts},
 pages = {17-37},
-title = {Developing a Water Quality Assessment Framework for Southwest {F}lorida Tidal Creeks},
+title = {Developing a Water Quality Assessment Framework for {S}outhwest {F}lorida Tidal Creeks},
 volume = {45},
 year = {2022},
 url = {https://doi.org/10.1007/s12237-021-00974-7},
@@ -674,7 +674,7 @@ @article{Smith18
 @book{NOAA15,
 address = {Silver Spring, Maryland},
 author = {{National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration}},
-publisher = {National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration},
+publisher = {{National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration}},
 title = {Guidance for considering the use of living shorelines, Final guidance document prepared by the {NOAA} Living Shorelines Workgroup},
 year = {2015},
 }
@@ -691,7 +691,7 @@ @book{Meyers90
 address = {Orlando, Florida},
 author = {Meyers, R. L. and Ewel, J. J.},
 publisher = {University of Central Florida Press},
-title = {Ecosystems of Florida},
+title = {Ecosystems of {F}lorida},
 year = {1990},
 }
 
@@ -786,16 +786,17 @@ @book{FDOT99
 address = {Tallahassee, Florida},
 author = {{Florida Department of Transportation}},
 edition = {Third},
-publisher = {FDOT Surveying and Mapping Office Geographic Mapping Section},
+publisher = {{FDOT Surveying and Mapping Office Geographic Mapping Section}},
 title = {{F}lorida land use, cover and forms classification system},
 year = {1999},
 }
 
 @unpublished{SWFWMD14,
 author = {{Southwest Florida Water Management District}},
-note = {Updated: October 22},
+note = {Updated: October 22, 2014},
 title = {Photo interpretation key for land use classification},
 year = {2014},
+url={https://www31.swfwmd.state.fl.us/Documents/Photo_Interpretation_Key_2014.pdf}
 }
 
 @article{Osland12,
@@ -999,7 +1000,7 @@ @Article{Pebesma18
 
 @software{Beck22,
   author = {Marcus W. Beck and Gary E. Raulerson and Edward T. Sherwood},
-  title = {tbep-tech/hmpu-workflow: v1.2.0},
+  title = {{t}bep-tech/hmpu-workflow: v1.2.0},
   year = {2022},
   publisher = {Zenodo},
   version = {v1.2.0},
@@ -1020,7 +1021,7 @@ @article{Greening14
 }
 
 @article{Lopez19,
-	title={Temperature mediates secondary dormancy in resting cysts of {\emph{Pyrodinium bahamense}} (Dinophyceae)},
+	title={Temperature mediates secondary dormancy in resting cysts of {\emph{Pyrodinium bahamense}} ({D}inophyceae)},
 	author={Lopez, Cary B. and Karim, Aliza and Murasko, Susan and Marot, Marci and Smith, Christopher G. and Corcoran, Alina A.},
 	year={2019},
 	journal={Journal of Phycology},
@@ -1047,7 +1048,7 @@ @article{Osland22
 }
 
 @article{Sheehan19,
-	title = {Blue {C}arbon: an Additional Driver for Restoring and Preserving Ecological Services of Coastal Wetlands in {T}ampa {B}ay ({F}lorida, {USA})},
+	title = {Blue carbon: an additional driver for restoring and preserving ecological services of coastal wetlands in {T}ampa {B}ay ({F}lorida, {USA})},
 	author = {Sheehan, Lindsey and Sherwood, Edward T. and Moyer, Ryan P. and Radabaugh, Kara R. and Simpson, Stefanie},
 	year = {2019},
 	month = {04},
@@ -1064,7 +1065,7 @@ @article{Sheehan19
 @inproceedings{Jones09,
   title={Reduced Impact Development Practices at “Restoration”},
   author={Jones, Pierce H and Larson, Barbra C and Clark, Mark W},
-  booktitle={American Institute of Physics Conference Proceedings},
+  booktitle={American {I}nstitute of {P}hysics {C}onference {P}roceedings},
   volume={1157},
   number={1},
   pages={151--161},

diff --git a/revision2/Becketal.docx b/revision2/Becketal.docx
diff --git a/revision2/Becketal.pdf b/revision2/Becketal.pdf
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diff --git a/revision2/checklist.txt b/revision2/checklist.txt
@@ -0,0 +1,5 @@
+1. Manually remove figures from text, place in folder named as Figure1, Figure2, etc.
+2. Change Figure header to Figure captions
+3. Format table captions, verify correct order in text
+4. Save as PDF for submission
+6. Remove line numbers from supplement
diff --git a/revision2/my_styles.docx b/revision2/my_styles.docx
diff --git a/revision2/review_response.docx b/revision2/review_response.docx
diff --git a/revision2/review_response.qmd b/revision2/review_response.qmd
@@ -0,0 +1,61 @@
+---
+format: 
+  docx:
+    reference-doc: my_styles.docx
+    number-sections: false
+bibliography: ../refs.bib
+csl: ../frontiers-in-ecology-and-evolution.csl
+---
+
+Below are our itemized responses to your comments. Thank you for your time in reviewing the content before a final decision is made. 
+
+Line 29: Remove “restoration planning” from the list of keywords as these words already appear in the title of your manuscript. You are welcome to replace them with (an)other word(s)
+
+* __Response__: Removed and added "habitat loss".
+
+Line 93/94: Replace the comma with “and, i.e. “…could occur and where…”
+
+* __Response__: Replaced comma with "and".
+
+Line 161: Add in brackets the hectare equivalent of “0.25 acres” seeing that all the results reported in your
+manuscript is in hectares.
+
+* __Response__: Added hectares equivalent. 
+
+Line 188: Consider replacing “taking” with “calculating”
+
+* __Response__: Replaced.
+
+Line 227: Add a full stop after “watershed”
+
+* __Response__: Added.
+
+Line 398: How do you align this sentence with your statement in Line 292-293 “This increase may represent improved ground-truthing and photointerpretation, rather than a true increase in coverage.” I suggest you rephrase the sentence in 3.1 to state that this increase may also be due to improved ground-truthing and photointerpretation (and leave out the second part).
+
+* __Response__: The statement on line 292-293 was referring to oyster bars, not seagrass.  The sentence was revised for clarity: "The increase in oyster bars may represent improved ground-truthing and photointerpretation."
+
+Line 420-421: What do you mean by “in place of mangroves”? Do you mean that the increased anthropogenic water withdrawal favour mangrove forests? If so, then rephrase to make the meaning clearer.
+
+* __Response__: Sentence was rephrased as "Anthropogenic water withdrawals have also reduced freshwater flows reaching tidal marshes, contributing to reductions in coverage of key species (e.g., *Juncus roemerianus*) that have favored mangroves (Raabe et al., 2012)."
+
+Table 1: Increase size of column 1 so that the text does not run into the 2nd column
+
+* __Response__: Done.
+
+Table 5: Please explain in the title, table or in the text what you mean by “out-decade”. Also be consistent in the use of “out-decade” vs “out decade” in the table.
+
+* __Response__: Revised to "each decade".
+
+References (Line 600 to end): Please double check the titles of the manuscripts as several references do not contain capitals in their titles, e.g.
+
+Line 604: tampa bay
+
+Line 609: rio grande and mexico
+
+Line 615: spartina
+
+Line 626: california
+
+* __Response__: Corrected all references where capitals were needed.
+
+
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