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nickbytes committed Mar 9, 2018
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</SimpleScene>
<SimpleScene isVisible={props.c1}>
<CustomContainer>
<MainText>You board the train again.</MainText>
<MainText>
You board the train again and watch {props.petNameInputSaved} waving
at you through the glass in the sliding doors. You hear The Council's
words reverberate through your head.
{props.petNameInputSaved} waves at your from the platform at the
sliding doors close.
</MainText>
<MainText>
You hear The Council's words reverberate through your head.
</MainText>
<NextButton onClick={() => props.update(ns("s5", "c2"))} />
</CustomContainer>
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<Echo>It must be her. She is nearly halfway trained now.</Echo>

<Echo>Exceptional ability and upside.</Echo>
<MainText>
They listened to your pleas to help, to take the task yourself, but
they would have nothing of it.
</MainText>

<MainText>You are just the messenger.</MainText>
<Echo>The Council must act soon.</Echo>

<NextButton onClick={() => props.update(ns("s5", "c3"))} />
</CustomContainer>
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<CustomContainer>
<MainText>The dangers, they told you, were great.</MainText>
<MainText>
One of their less capable magicians had been caught, before even being
able to carry out their plan. They now relied on Olive.
One of their less capable magicians had been caught trying to carry
out their plan.
</MainText>
<MainText>They now relied on Olive.</MainText>
<NextButton onClick={() => props.update(ns("s5", "c5"))} />
</CustomContainer>
</SimpleScene>

<SimpleScene isVisible={props.c5}>
<CustomContainer>
<MainText>What had happened to the other magician...?</MainText>
<MainText>
You had asked, but they told you it did not concern you.
</MainText>

<MainText>
You thought you heard one of the {props.petTypeInputSaved}s mumble
something about <i>permanent memory allicilatory obfunscator</i>.
</MainText>

<MainText>You asked more, but they wouldn't tell you.</MainText>

<MainText>
What had happened to the other magician...? You had asked, but they
would not speak of it, and when you thought you heard one of the{" "}
{props.petTypeInputSaved}s mumble something about{" "}
<i>permanent memory allicilatory obfunscator</i> they didn't explain,
you asked more, but they would not tell you.
Your role was to be the <i>messenger</i>.
</MainText>
<NextButton onClick={() => props.update(ns("s5", "c6"))} />
</CustomContainer>
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</MainText>

<MainText>
... well what is this place ...? Slashington, they had called it.
</MainText>

<MainText>
You think about it for a second. Another dimension? A rip in reality?
More like a soft tear.
... well what is this place ...? <i>Slashington</i>, they had called
it.
</MainText>
<NextButton onClick={() => props.update(ns("s5", "c7"))} />
</CustomContainer>
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<SimpleScene isVisible={props.c7}>
<CustomContainer>
<MainText>
Anyway, what else were they capable of... you had never felt anything
like what you felt from the keyboard.
What else were they capable of... you had never felt anything like
what you felt from the keyboard.
</MainText>

<MainText>
Even now, with it sitting right next to you, you dared not touch a
key. You feared the power it held over you.
key.
</MainText>
<MainText>You feared the power it held over you.</MainText>
<NextButton onClick={() => props.update(ns("s5", "c8"))} />
</CustomContainer>
</SimpleScene>
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Three or four seconds. Suddenly the car{" "}
<Clickable clickFn={() => props.update(burst())}>bursts</Clickable>{" "}
</ColorSwitch>
with light, you grimace and squint in the stark contrast. When you
open your eyes, the train car is again packed with people, regular
people. People reading their tablets, morning papers, talking on cell
phones, glancing out the window as you pass through Baltimore.
with light, you grimace and squint in the stark contrast.
</MainText>
<MainText>
When you open your eyes, the train car is again packed with people,
regular people.
</MainText>

<MainText>
People reading their tablets, morning papers, talking on cell phones,
glancing out the window as you pass through Baltimore.
</MainText>
<NextButton onClick={() => props.update(ns("s5", "c11"))} />
</CustomContainer>
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</UserQuote>

<MainText>
You hear the concern in his voice. He thinks you brought it to
complete some work this weekend. If only...
You hear the concern in his voice. He thinks you brought it to do some
work this weekend.
</MainText>

<MainText>If only...</MainText>
<NextButton onClick={() => props.update(ns("s5", "c12"))} />
</CustomContainer>
</SimpleScene>
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A gift for {props.nieceName}.
</UserQuote>
<MainText>
Carefully not to touch a key, you put the keyboard into your duffle
bag.
Careful not to touch a key, you put the keyboard into your duffle bag.
</MainText>
<NextButton onClick={() => props.update(ns("s5", "c13"))} />
</CustomContainer>
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<SimpleScene isVisible={props.c13}>
<CustomContainer>
<MainText>
He goes on chatting about work, neighbors, {props.inLawName}'s job,
only do you take notice when he mentions the exceptional grades{" "}
He goes on chatting about work, neighbors, {props.inLawName}'s new
job... only do you take notice when he mentions the exceptional grades{" "}
{props.nieceName} has been getting.
</MainText>
<NextButton onClick={() => props.update(ns("s5", "c14"))} />
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<SimpleScene isVisible={props.c14}>
<CustomContainer>
<UserQuote attrib={`You, ${props.playerNameSaved}`}>
That's great, real great.
That's great, really great.
</UserQuote>
<MainText>You try to hide the dread in your voice.</MainText>
<MainText>You try to hide the worry in your voice.</MainText>
<NextChapter to={`/birthday-party`} />
</CustomContainer>
</SimpleScene>
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